Stumbled on this post from Single-Promise573. For the first essay, the third paragraph.Still on the third paragraph, this is to show how other members were being supportive.For the assessment, one piece of evidence that shows my professor pointed out places where my writing was vague and where I used run-on sentences.Professor’s feedback on my visual essay.
Editing process for my visual essay in CapCut, where I shortened clips and organized the timeline to make the video flow more clearly. Brainstorming notes for my essay, where I organized my ideas and narrowed my topic into a clearer argument.
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